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Post by Madfox on Jun 12, 2016 3:18:23 GMT
Bullet point the plot points you really want to see in Act 4. There's a very brief case outline on the Act 4 board for reference! Maya has been working on it for a really long time, and is almost done, so check that out!
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Post by Oracle on Jun 12, 2016 9:32:31 GMT
i'm not sure where to put this but, i wanted the lines about
"I'm sure miss magic underwear would have been a better bet"
"That's magic panties to you, Polly!"
Somewhere in this act, maybe in the thing I've got going for Vera and Apollo's pre-trial song when they first meet? Because I know it is in this case after all x)
Also
Lamiroir being compared to Vera at the end of the case, that's a really striking thing to me, that nick makes the comment that they both survived, since they realised they had someone to live for
I feel that would be a good closing song, phoenix comparing lamiroir living for her children to vera living to thank them
But it's only an idea for now but i'd love to see that incorporated somewhere ^ v ^
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Post by Madfox on Jun 12, 2016 20:14:21 GMT
Ah, that's a good idea! It's less amusing but a lot more profound than Kai's closer. XD
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Post by Oracle on Jun 12, 2016 20:22:17 GMT
It's mostly just a bit of drivel I had for a closer because as I was reading over the case on the wiki, I saw that comment and it just really sat nicely with me, and so I felt it'd be an emotional way to end the musical y'know? But I'd be way down for hearing the more amusing closer! Perhaps we could do two? xD Like, a more amusing one like Payne's song in the Act One thread sorta thing, a parody of nothing in particular?
Depends how much work it'd be of course, and how we want the musical to end xD
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Post by Madfox on Jun 13, 2016 12:05:35 GMT
It's mostly just a bit of drivel I had for a closer because as I was reading over the case on the wiki, I saw that comment and it just really sat nicely with me, and so I felt it'd be an emotional way to end the musical y'know? But I'd be way down for hearing the more amusing closer! Perhaps we could do two? xD Like, a more amusing one like Payne's song in the Act One thread sorta thing, a parody of nothing in particular? Depends how much work it'd be of course, and how we want the musical to end xD Kai's was like "It's your story from here on out, Apollo! ...Unless I retake the bar exam!" |
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Post by Oracle on Jun 13, 2016 15:53:52 GMT
Poor Apollo omg,,, xD
It's so true though :')
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Post by Madfox on Jun 16, 2016 3:34:25 GMT
So here's an idea. Rather than have half of Apollo's trial, Phoenix's trial, and then Apollo's trial, let's just do Phoenix's trial and then do Apollo's trial.
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Post by Lumos314 on Jun 16, 2016 4:27:13 GMT
Wait, I thought all of the flashback was going to be told in a song?
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Post by Madfox on Jun 16, 2016 19:05:13 GMT
I was wondering about that too. I dunno, man. That would be a really complicated song.
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Post by Oracle on Jun 17, 2016 5:13:00 GMT
I think the idea Maddy had was probably more simple to do, as I guess the Phoenix song would cover the WHOLE MASON system, as opposed to doing each individually, and I think that'd be nice to have before the Apollo's trial section xD
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Post by Madfox on Jun 19, 2016 3:36:47 GMT
It would be cool to have a Phoenix and Valant song where they talk about the trial.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 15, 2016 16:44:53 GMT
So here's an idea. Rather than have half of Apollo's trial, Phoenix's trial, and then Apollo's trial, let's just do Phoenix's trial and then do Apollo's trial. I was thinking of making a song purely for the diary page, as it's so impactful, it would be kinda short but it needs to be addressed. |
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Post by Deleted on Dec 21, 2016 15:01:53 GMT
Do you think we should have a scene where Klavier apologizes to Phoenix? I would be nice to give that whole thing closure.
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Post by Oracle on Dec 21, 2016 17:50:16 GMT
I'm sure that could be something included in the finale!
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Post by skyesisters on Dec 21, 2016 18:16:09 GMT
I also love this idea.
Regarding Phoenix's case, I was hoping to write a court suite of songs from my Rise from the Ashes musical (though obviously with different lyrics) to reflect the fact that we're seeing Phoenix in the past.
It would be a good idea to do the cases separately, but I prefer the following:-
-Apollo's investigation section
-Apollo's trial section
-Phoenix's court suite
-A medley of shorter songs detailing the events of the MASON system
-Some sort of finale song to 'close' the MASON segment and introduce us to Apollo's final trial section
-Apollo's final trial section
-Musical finale song
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Post by Deleted on Feb 5, 2017 19:08:41 GMT
Guys we are forgetting ONE MAJOR THING kristophs whole involvment in case 4. like this is really important. And its going to be a LONG SONG. this is basically the finaly its the climax. (if its not a long song it will be several) so we should definatly start brainstorming for this. One of the ideas iv been tossing around is kristophs taunting and control of klavier. By thi point klavier has practically realized hes being played like a pupet he just needs the last push. I think this is a moment we NEED to capitalize on becaus it basically is klaviers character ark (And piano man needs resolution dammit capcom) honestly i think this should also be something considered for case 3. Klavier begginig to realize hes being played like a pupet, but shrugging it off as being paranoid. (decree of the prosicutor anyone?) sorry just throwing ideas around.
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Post by skyesisters on Feb 6, 2017 16:08:29 GMT
Guys we are forgetting ONE MAJOR THING kristophs whole involvment in case 4. like this is really important. And its going to be a LONG SONG. this is basically the finaly its the climax. (if its not a long song it will be several) so we should definatly start brainstorming for this. One of the ideas iv been tossing around is kristophs taunting and control of klavier. By thi point klavier has practically realized hes being played like a pupet he just needs the last push. I think this is a moment we NEED to capitalize on becaus it basically is klaviers character ark (And piano man needs resolution dammit capcom) honestly i think this should also be something considered for case 3. Klavier begginig to realize hes being played like a pupet, but shrugging it off as being paranoid. (decree of the prosicutor anyone?) sorry just throwing ideas around. I agree, this is a very important moment. I think we could perhaps have a reprise of his waltz motif's descent into madness from Act 1. Perhaps we could turn Guilty Love into a waltz, to show that Kristoph is determined not to let his brother shine; he's going to clutch onto whatever he can, driving others below him. |
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Post by Kai on Feb 9, 2017 1:27:01 GMT
Reminder that the MASON song is still undergoing ridiculously heavy construction.
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